Question

is this a good thesis.Texting while driving kills an estemate of 1.2 million people each year

Answer 1

It is a good statement of fact. You can use this to support your thesis. Start by trying to answer the question, So what?

Answer 2

so this would be like an introduction insted of a thesis

Answer 3

Not necessarily. It is a statement of fact. You may use it as an introductory statement, but there is nothing to build on. Again the question, So what? An introduction is usually a paragraph that offers information about and leading to the thesis. So, what are you wanting to explain or prove about the FACT that, "Texting while driving kills an estemate of 1.2 million people each year."

Answer 4

What is the purpose of your paper? Who is your audience?

Answer 5

its for a persusive paper on texting while driving

Answer 6

hello

Answer 7

OK. I will assume your purpose is to persuade people that texting while driving is wrong. Answer questions like, Why is texting while driving wrong? The sentence you have given would go here. Build on it with VERIFIABLE facts. Where did you get that sentence? You have to provide the information where you got that, be careful to use appropriate citations. Then maybe build on the effects "texting while driving" has had on the nation, or let's be more specific, a family or school.

Go to the Purdue OWL website and read about 'persuasive essays'. Ask your instructor for further help about how to become a better student or more specifically, ask what can I do to do better in 'your' class. Make it personal. In order to succeed as a student you have to investigate and learn about WHAT is expected, in order to learn how to do what is asked. Always remember the ONLY stupid question is the one you DON'T ask.

Answer 8

Sorry, I do not type very fast and sometimes it takes me a while to put my thoughts in order.

Answer 9

Oh um its ok, i kinda misspell stuff when i type to fast.And thank you very much.

Answer 10

You are welcome. Please feel free to contact me. I will help as much as I can. Blessings and prayers for your success.