Which of these phrases uses the best voice and word choice for a scary story?

It was a dark and stormy night; the breath of the cool breeze sent shivers up my spine.

The little mice danced with joy because they were so excited about their new home.

Her grandmother's voice grew weak as she told the story of her journey to America.

Leonard ran so quickly his heart was beating out of his chest and his lungs burned.

I know its between A and D but I'm not sure. :/

Question

Which of these phrases uses the best voice and word choice for a scary story?

It was a dark and stormy night; the breath of the cool breeze sent shivers up my spine.
 
The little mice danced with joy because they were so excited about their new home.
 
Her grandmother's voice grew weak as she told the story of her journey to America.
 
Leonard ran so quickly his heart was beating out of his chest and his lungs burned. 

I know its between A and D but I'm not sure. :/

anonymous · Answer

D

anonymous · Answer

r you sure?

anonymous · Answer

I think it is A.  A uses more descriptive language about the setting.  The setting is what is making the story scary.

anonymous · Answer

A. It uses scarily- phrased imagery to start the story.