Question

Help Please?

Answer 1

The following business letter needs some work. Read the letter to answer the question.

Square Box Company
56789 South Bend Circle
King, Illinois 55544


Hello Mr. or Ms. Smith,

1 Would you consider this donation to our school? We would love to talk with you and share our plans for the floats if that would interest you. Please let me know if you are willing and able to help us in this way. Thank you for supporting your local schools.


2 I am writing to you today to ask for a donation to our school. I go to school at King High School just down the road from your box factory. My name is Sara Samuel, and I am the Student Council President.

3 We are preparing for our annual Homecoming parade and would like to create floats out of boxes. We have a great plan but need the resources to accomplish it. We need 75 boxes and were wondering if your company would be willing to donate them. Our sponsor said that wecould provide you with a receipt for tax deduction purposes, and we would make a banner to put on the floats that proudly proclaims "Donated by Square Box Company." I think this would be a great advertisement to the community since everyone comes out to watch the Homecoming parade.

Sincerely Yours:

Sara Samuel
Student Council President
1234 NW Madison Street
King, Illinois 55544
August 24, 2010


p.s. You can call me at 222-222-2222 with any questions or comments. Thanks!

Answer 2

What suggestions would you make to this student to improve the tone of her letter?
Choose one answer.
a. Use imagery to describe the homecoming floats they have planned for the parade.
b. Revise word choice in the letter to include more vivid, varied, and specific words.
c. Include details about the homecoming activities in which the company can participate.
d. Implement descriptive language to show how close the company and school are.

Answer 3

What suggestions would you make to this student to help her get her letter in the correct format?
Choose one answer.
a. Move her address and the date to the top of the letter.
b. Left justify the letter and indent each paragraph 10 spaces.
c. Right justify the letter and change the margins to one inch.
d. Keep the letter centered but move the postscript to the body.

Answer 4

First one I think is C or D

Answer 5

The second one I think D.........

Answer 6

@dragons1415

Answer 7

@lydiakay92308

Answer 8

c

Answer 9

For the first one?