How can I repeat the following sentence but in different order so it sounds better before going onto the next topic in my paragraph? (Paragraph not shown) Firstly, I think both Rome and the United States tried to get their governments as fair as possible at the start. ..........
Is this and informative paper or persuasion paper?
-do you mean "as far as possible"? "For example, both Rome and the U.S. are concentrating on building a bigger/better ______, by doing ______." then go into detail.
If you use 'firstly', remember there needs to be at least one follow up point ('secondly') that needs to be expressed AND that shares a relationship to the first point. Also you stated, "How can I repeat the following sentence but in different order so it sounds better before going onto the NEXT TOPIC in my paragraph?" A paragraph should only have ONE topic (whatever the topic is in your topic sentence). Do not jump around to different topics in the same paragraph. It will make your essay confusing, hard to read, and will earn you a deduction in score.
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