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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Part of my essay; do the verb tenses agree? "But as time went on, I realized that in order to be successful in the future, I had to work as hard as I could and give it my best in order to prove to myself and to others that I deserve a future. I have to earn one."

OpenStudy (anonymous):

should I change to "deserved" and "had" ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Change those two, other than that, it's good.

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