Which example shows the effects of good editing?
A. If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out too cans a day; they could loose 25 pounds in a year.
B. If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out two cans a day, they could lose 25 pounds in a year.
C. If people who drink allot of soft drinks? If they cut out two cans a day, they could lose 25 pounds a year?
D. If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out two cans a day, they could lose: 25 pounds in a year.

Question

Which example shows the effects of good editing?
	A.	If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out too cans a day; they could loose 25 pounds in a year.
	B.	If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out two cans a day, they could lose 25 pounds in a year.
	C.	If people who drink allot of soft drinks? If they cut out two cans a day, they could lose 25 pounds a year?
	D.	If people who drink a lot of soft drinks cut out two cans a day, they could lose: 25 pounds in a year.

anonymous · Answer

B.....cuz c nd d r not it for sure...nd a isnt it cuz it cant b 2 separate sentences.

anonymous · Answer

thank you so much :)

anonymous · Answer

thnx for the medal....its my first one!!!

anonymous · Answer

well you help me so that is the only thing that i can do for you or try to help you with a question :)