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how do u put a document up so someone can read it? and tell if spelling and such is wrong

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Did you type your document ?

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yes

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Select all of it till it turns blue , then hold ctrl & c at the same time to copy ,or instead you can select it all to be blue , then right click & go to copy . Tell me when you're done .

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or i can just touch this Attach file xD i just now saw it

Answer 5

Lol sometimes it doesn't work so I just copy & paste . xD

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ok sooo my friend was writing this story and she wanted me to fix anything butttt im terrible at english

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so i think thats wright

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right

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It's not letting me download it :(

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oh then ill put it here

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OpenStudy ! Why must you be like this ! ;~; It keeps saying '' An error has occurred " To pate you can just do crtl + v or right click & go down to paste .

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Paste *

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k
first two chapters -_-

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The Two New Members (TTNM)
Chapter 1: Abigail's past
“Abigail!" Mom yelled from downstairs. I ran down as fast as I could without falling.
"Yes Ma'am?"
Her hand came in contact with my check
"Did I ask you to speak?" She asked infuriated
I nodded my hear as if to say no but didn't say another word

"Your father and I have been talking lately and we decided that since today is your 10th birthday you're able to take care of yourself" She looked at my dad and nodded. He stood up and walked over to me. I cringed afraid of what he going to do next.

He flung me over his shoulder. I tried to get away but couldn't. He opened the front door and literally threw me out the door. The snow softened my fall but it still hurt.
"Good-bye sweetheart” Was all he said before slamming the door.

Tears were running down my cheeks. I finally got up and walked for about two miles. We lived in the middle-of-nowhere in England so it was pointless to ask for help because there was nobody around.

I finally just sat down in the snow and pulled out my diary and pencil that I always kept in a little purse under my shirt so my parents didn't see it.

( http://ak1.polyvoreimg.com/cgi/img-set/cid/89766402/id/zolqMiqcQUeHy6uMWSju6g/size/y.jpg)

I opened up the the next blank pace and wrote
Dec. 12. 2011
Dear Diary,
Today is my 10th birthday and the worst day of my life. I got kicked out and have nowhere to go. All I had is a mattress on the floor in the attic and you and I lost the most important one. No offense. I'm so numb I can barely feel my body and I'm scarred. What am I going to do ne-

that's all I could write before I passed out.



Chapter 2: Adoption
*Liam's P.O.V*

Once we got home from Africa reality hit us (and during our time there). We realized that there are people less fortunate than us everywhere. So we started the process to adopt one or two 12-13 year old girl(s).
We're on our way to the orphanage now to visit the girls and see if we find someone.

*Hailey's P.O.V*

I shook Abby trying to wake her up
"We're going to get in so much trounble and be late" I mumbled
"WAKE UP!" I yelled into her ear. She sat straight up

“C’mon, we’re going to be late” I told her as she layed back down
“For what?” she mumbled into her pillow hold snowball -her stuffed dog- in her arms
“How ‘bout you look at the calendar” I told her tossing her the calendar. She looked at today and jumped up.


“What to wear? what to wear? what to wear?” she mumbled looking for her clothes looking for something to wear.


She picked out a Marvel tank top and ripped denim shorts. She put her long blonde hair in a ponytail and put a white flat billed hat on. She pulled her ponytail though the back little opening. she put on some light pink lip gloss and our best friend Oreo necklace and some socks.


“Let’s go” She said walking over to the door
I cleared my throat “You might need shoes”
“Oh yeah, I might”

She put on some white converse that where the same as mine but hers were high-tops.

"My outfit ( http://ak2.polyvoreimg.com/cgi/img-set/cid/89619943/id/1W_VglinQCCknWjzy2sZcQ/size/y.jpg) is complete!" She announced before running out the door
I closed the door and ran after her.


We got down rite as Mrs. Deyes -the owner of the orphanage- was telling us to be nice and all that. She shot us glace but we quickly joined the other girls. Apparently they were looking for a or two 12-13 year old girl(s) so that is why we're the only ones down here.


She opened the door and Liam, Niall, Louis, Zayn and Harry walked in. Gasps were heard all over the room.


Louis looked at me, smiled and pointed at my outfit. Wondering what he was talking about I looked down. I laughed noticing that I was wearing the girl version of his signature outfit
( http://ak1.polyvoreimg.com/cgi/img-set/cid/89644839/id/ruIJIDKZQMWHKn0rvdIZmA/size/y.jpg)
I looked back up at him and giggled


"These 5 lovely lads are going to be spending some time with you and then decide if they want to adopt one or two of you today" Mrs. Deyes explained. We all nodded and she went back to her office as she always did.


I grabbed Abby by the arm and we ran to the stairs to go ther room to grab something fast to eat. At the bottom of the stairs Regina -this one girl who thinks she's all that- stopped


"OH MY GOSH Regina what happened to your face?!" I asked shocked
"What is it, What is it? take it off take it off!" She said freaking out
"Oh wait, it's still the same"
"UGH" she stomped her foot and walked away
We laughed and ran up the stairs. Actually Abby ran up the stair I can't really run so I just went up faster than normal.
We ate a granola bar and went back down.
The girls where introducing themselves to the boys. Liam saw us an walked over to me. Abby walked over to Louis.
"What's your name?"
"Hailey" I replied kind of nervous, I always get nervous when people come to adopt someone
"How long have you been here?"
"Um... 2 years" Oh no now he is going to ask why and I don't want to talk about it
"Nice meeting you Hailey" He said smiling. He didn't ask a thing about my past, yay


I could see the other girls trying to get their attention or something
C'mon girls, 3 are dating and even if they weren't, they're too old for you! is all I wanted to tell them but I kept my mouth shut.


We hung out with them for about another hour and half. Mrs. Deyes finally came out of her office and told us to go to our rooms. We all ran up and the boys went into her office.


after about 30 minutes Mrs. Deyes opened our door without knocking as always.
"Today is your luck day girls" she said smiling "Both of you are getting adopted today by the lads"
Abby and I both looked at her with wide eyes
"Get your things packed, you're leaving in 30 minutes" She closed the door and we started squealing.

We quickly packed all of our things and put them in our suitcases -we had 2 each. We tore down out posters and stuck them in there. We ran out of the rooms and went downstairs to where the boys, Mrs. Deyes and everybody else. In total there where 50 kids in the orphanage (48 now since we're leaving). They put our suitcases in the car and we said out good byes and hugs and all that. Mrs. Deyes told them to go to their rooms. They did as she said and she turned back to us
"Liam is the one officially adopting you but you will be living with all of them since they live together. We nodded and told her good bye. We got into the car and were off.

Answer 15

its really long

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Alright , tell me what I'm looking for .. ?

Answer 17

words spelled wrong lol

Answer 18

Ah . :) Gimmie a few mins .

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lol ok :)

Answer 20

Done ! Here you go .

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> I nodded my hear as if to say no but didn't say another word
Change hear to head . I think that one was accidental .
> http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/img-set/cid/89766402/id/zolqMiqcQUeHy6uMWSju6g/size/y.jpg
I think the link it broken cause it opened a new page & stayed blank , tried reloading twice .
> I opened up the the next blank pace and wrote
Chage pace to page, again common mistake.
>I'm scarred. What am I going to do ne-
Change scarred to scared , scarred is like " I think I'm scarred for life after seeing that . "
>"We're going to get in so much trounble and be late" I mumbled
Change trounble to trouble, add a period after mumbled .
>"WAKE UP!" I yelled into her ear. She sat straight up
Add a period after up .
>“C’mon, we’re going to be late” I told her as she layed back down
“For what?” she mumbled into her pillow hold snowball -her stuffed dog- in her arms
Add periods after down & Arms .
>I looked back up at him and giggled
Period after giggled .

>"These 5 lovely lads are going to be spending some time with you and then decide if they want to adopt one or two of you today" Mrs. Deyes explained. We all nodded and she went back to her office as she always did.
You have to type out five .. Only way to use numbers is if it's over 10 .

>"OH MY GOSH Regina what happened to your face?!" I asked shocked
"What is it, What is it? take it off take it off!" She said freaking out
"Oh wait, it's still the same"
"UGH" she stomped her foot and walked away
We laughed and ran up the stairs. Actually Abby ran up the stair I can't really run so I just went up faster than normal.
We ate a granola bar and went back down.
The girls where introducing themselves to the boys. Liam saw us an walked over to me. Abby walked over to Louis.
"What's your name?"
"Hailey" I replied kind of nervous, I always get nervous when people come to adopt someone
"How long have you been here?"
"Um... 2 years" Oh no now he is going to ask why and I don't want to talk about it
"Nice meeting you Hailey" He said smiling. He didn't ask a thing about my past, yay
Punctuation !! Periods after : shocked , out , same but on the left side of " , someone , it , & yay.

>I could see the other girls trying to get their attention or something
Period after something .
>after about 30 minutes Mrs. Deyes opened our door without knocking as always.
"Today is your luck day girls" she said smiling "Both of you are getting adopted today by the lads"
Abby and I both looked at her with wide eyes
"Get your things packed, you're leaving in 30 minutes" She closed the door and we started squealing.
Capitalize A in After . Comma after girls on the left side of " , comma afte smiling , lowercase B for both & period after lads on the left side of " .
> We quickly packed all of our things and put them in our suitcases -we had 2 each. We tore down out posters and stuck them in there. We ran out of the rooms and went downstairs to where the boys, Mrs. Deyes and everybody else. In total there where 50 kids in the orphanage (48 now since we're leaving). They put our suitcases in the car and we said out good byes and hugs and all that. Mrs. Deyes told them to go to their rooms. They did as she said and she turned back to us
"Liam is the one officially adopting you but you will be living with all of them since they live together. We nodded and told her good bye. We got into the car and were off.
Change 2 to two , comma ever Mrs . Deyes , change out to our , make goodbye one word , take out the and after goodbyes & replace it with a comma , & lastly period after us .

Hope I helped ! :D

Answer 22

Oh in the last one ,
> We nodded and told her good bye.
Make it one word . Goodbye . cx It took me a few seconds to fix it . But It's a really good story , minus the fact I don't care too much for 1D . xD I like it other than that . (: Fantastic job !

Answer 23

im not a fan of them ether lol but im not going to tell her xD