(From Romeo to Juliet)
Although our families may stir
I can’t help but love her
Like a river flows surely to sea
Some things are just meant to be
Our family’s anger will not last
For I will put it in the past
Take my hand, my whole life too
For I can’t help but falling for you
Now I’ve come to find you dead
You should’ve taken my life instead
Come to think of it, that, I’ll do
I’m sorry this has happened to you.

I don't do poetry, but this is my attempt of connecting "cant help falling in love " by elvis && romeo and Juliet. Opinions?

Question

(From Romeo to Juliet)
Although our families may stir
I can’t help but love her
Like a river flows surely to sea
Some things are just meant to be
Our family’s anger will not last
For I will put it in the past
Take my hand, my whole life too
For I can’t help but falling for you
Now I’ve come to find you dead
You should’ve taken my life instead
Come to think of it, that, I’ll do
I’m sorry this has happened to you.


I don't do poetry, but this is my attempt of connecting "cant help falling in love " by elvis && romeo and Juliet.  Opinions?

anonymous · Answer

Pretty good, I have to say. Not bad, at all.

anonymous · Answer

Awesome :) you can write poetry!

anonymous · Answer

Thank you so much!! Im so happy this is over with haha, you have no idea how happy I am :D

anonymous · Answer

Haha I bet! and you should be happy because that is really good!

mwhit2101 · Answer

That's pretty good! Nice job!