Question

help??? Show that you know how to use transitional elements by rewriting the following set of sentences into a coherent paragraph. Career planning is essential for all high school students. Students need to understand their strengths and weaknesses. They should learn where their talents lie. They should know career opportunities for the twenty-first century. They should know which jobs require further schooling. They should know how much the job they are interested in will pay.

Answer 1

The following paragraphs represent weak and strong examples of coherence.

Weak Example: For me, the worst thing about waiting tables is the uniform. All the waitresses had to wear this ugly brown striped jumper. The shirts were polyester. Sometimes someone you know comes in. Now I have a job in an office.

Strong Example: For me, the worst thing about waiting tables was the uniform. At the last place I worked, all the waitresses had to wear an ugly brown striped jumper. Underneath it we had to wear an even uglier polyester shirt. Sometimes someone I knew would come in and I'd feel embarrassed by my outfit. Now I have a job in an office, where I can wear my own clothes.

Answer 2

awesome thank you so much that makes sense now :)

Answer 3

No problem! Good Luck! ;)