Joi is writing a paper about Herman Hesse's novel Siddhartha. Here is the first paragraph of her draft.

(1) Siddhartha is a novel about a young man's search for enlightenment. (2) The title character has led a life of privilege. (3) Siddhartha is a member of the highest Hindu caste, the Brahmins. (4) He leaves his home, he leaves his material wealth, and he leaves his family to go on the search. (5) Siddhartha and his best friend, Govinda, join the Samanas. (6) A life of self–denial was led by the group.

How should Joi revise sentence 4?

He leaves his home, material wealth, and family in his search.
He leaves his home, his material wealth, and leaves his family to go on the search
Siddhartha leaves his home, his material wealth, and his family to go on the search.
Siddhartha leaves home and family to go on his search.

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Joi is writing a paper about Herman Hesse's novel Siddhartha. Here is the first paragraph of her draft.

(1) Siddhartha is a novel about a young man's search for enlightenment. (2) The title character has led a life of privilege. (3) Siddhartha is a member of the highest Hindu caste, the Brahmins. (4) He leaves his home, he leaves his material wealth, and he leaves his family to go on the search. (5) Siddhartha and his best friend, Govinda, join the Samanas. (6) A life of self–denial was led by the group.

How should Joi revise sentence 4?

He leaves his home, material wealth, and family in his search.
    He leaves his home, his material wealth, and leaves his family to go on the search
    Siddhartha leaves his home, his material wealth, and his family to go on the search.
    Siddhartha leaves home and family to go on his search.

anonymous · Answer

@Starr_Dynasty did you get help for your other two questions?  I saw you tagged me, but it won't let me get to your questions.

anonymous · Answer

ya i did i actually A ok on them but thnx for asking

anonymous · Answer

It's A. :)