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anonymous · Answer

Joi is writing a paper about Herman Hesse's novel Siddhartha. Here is the first paragraph of her draft.

     (1) Siddhartha is a novel about a young man's search for enlightenment. (2) The title character has led a life of privilege. (3) Siddhartha is a member of the highest Hindu caste, the Brahmins. (4) He leaves his home, he leaves his material wealth, and he leaves his family to go on the search. (5) Siddhartha and his best friend, Govinda, join the Samanas. (6) A life of self–denial was led by the group.

How should Joi revise sentence 4?

    He leaves his home, his material wealth, and leaves his family to go on the search
    Siddhartha leaves home and family to go on his search.
    Siddhartha leaves his home, his material wealth, and his family to go on the search.
    He leaves his home, material wealth, and family in his search.

anonymous · Answer

What would your guess be?

anonymous · Answer

ummmmm C

anonymous · Answer

please look at my qs
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anonymous · Answer

Mmm, not quite.  That answer would be using Saddartha too repetitively.  What would your second guess be? :)

anonymous · Answer

he left his materia,l wealth, and family to go on a trip

anonymous · Answer

@Rasheed will do, one second :)

anonymous · Answer

Good grief.  *Siddhartha.  lol sorry

anonymous · Answer

so 3rd option

anonymous · Answer

No, not the third option, Rasheed.  That one would use Siddhartha too repetitively.

anonymous · Answer

ya understanding the under state does seem to show to be the second but to state what he left behind and theory of mind saying its showing his journey and what he had to do to get to the place he needed to be

anonymous · Answer

does anyone understand tht lol

anonymous · Answer

Right.  So based on that, what do you think it would be?

anonymous · Answer

B right or possibly A bt if not it would leave us with D

anonymous · Answer

Well, it would not be B or D because both options use Siddhartha at the beginning, and using that would be too repetitive.  So, we're left with A and D.  Based on what you said " its showing his journey and what he had to do to get to the place he needed to be."  What makes more sense to you? :)

anonymous · Answer

so leaving us with the final answer A

anonymous · Answer

Right! :)  Great job!

anonymous · Answer

the answer is and was D

anonymous · Answer

The right answer was D?!

anonymous · Answer

yes it was

anonymous · Answer

Sorry :/.  I am really surprised about that.

anonymous · Answer

lol ok