Question

Help!

Answer 1

haha. how long does it have to be? and how old would the classmates be?

Answer 2

well it kind of does.

Answer 3

i can help you get started but i wont write everything for you

Answer 4

well first off you could start with something like..
As of today fellow classmates and I have decided we would like to watch an R rated movie, but without your support we cannot do so, therefore you must continue reading on...

Answer 5

Or something like that for the first paragraph

Answer 6

then your second one could say
Now that you understand our concern, I'd like to do a follow up on why we should be allowed to watch this R rated movie..

Answer 7

You need something more catchy for the beginning sentence, otherwise the rest is good. ill stay on this question till you're done so i can continue to help

Answer 8

maybe put "this is why we should be able to watch R rated movies." and then continue on with what you wrote

Answer 9

catches attention more when you really get to the point

Answer 10

yes

Answer 11

just support it, simple things haha..

Answer 12

get any further
?