(1) This week is going to be insane, Danesha thought to herself as she got ready for school. (2) With the end of the school year came all sorts of final projects, and every single project was due that Friday. (3) Danesha didn't understand why her teachers liked to assign everything at the same time. (4) After grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar, the school bus was heard. (5) Danesha flew out the door to catch it. (6) Occupied with all that needed to be done, the front door was accidentally left unlocked.

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1. Which of these, if any, is the clearest and most effective way to revise sentence 4?
After grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar, she heard the school bus.
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The school bus was heard after grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar.
She heard the school bus grabbing her lunch and a breakfast bar.