College personal essay question: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences.

this is what i have so far, is it good or not :

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College personal essay question: Rutgers University is a vibrant community of people with a wide variety of backgrounds and experiences. How would you benefit from and contribute to such an environment? Consider variables such as your talents, travels, leadership activities, volunteer services, and cultural experiences.

this is what i have so far, is it good or not :

anonymous · Answer

I need help starting this essay. Anyone willing to volunteer?

anonymous · Answer

What do you need help with, just the introduction paragraph?

anonymous · Answer

I kind of started the intro. Don't know if it sounds good.

anonymous · Answer

Either university is a college in which it's environment is very diverse. Going to a college like that is beneficial for me. I would benefit from a diverse college because it isn't limited to ethnicity, religion, and socio-background, rather than being consistent and tiresome. To an environment like Rutger's, I would be so motivated to contribute my experiences, my academic skills, and my own broad view. 



Does it sound good???

anonymous · Answer

That sounds good, also add that the diversity would allow you to learn more cultural differences. A university is a place to learn and diversity can greatly influence that experience, by teaching you things that you might not be able to learn at other colleges.

anonymous · Answer

May I ask what this is for?

anonymous · Answer

Is it an assignment or an actual college application?

anonymous · Answer

It is an actual college application. Why?

anonymous · Answer

I was just wondering, because I have to start applying soon as well and was wondering what the applications are like. If this was a type of question they asked.

anonymous · Answer

Thank you for the medal :)

anonymous · Answer

Yes it is. For Rutgers.btw, the deadline to apply for early decision is this Friday. You're welcome :)

anonymous · Answer

But isn't this "open study" not safe? Someone can plagiarize anyone's work.

anonymous · Answer

Oh I'm just a bit nervous cause I've hardly prepared for applying or anything. Is it long?

anonymous · Answer

Yup. Pretty long. But you have to have it parents next to you for the income info.

anonymous · Answer

Hmmm, I don't know I just signed up but maybe. Yea, i guess so. What do they seem to concentrate most on, scores or the essays?