can someone help me with my reseach paper please?

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anonymous · Answer

IVE WRITTEN IT IM JUST STUCK ON THE CONCLUSION AND I NEED SOMEONE TO EDIT IT TO MAKE IT BETTER. PLEASE IT IS MY SENIOR PAPER :(

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

I'm guessing that you're not a native English speaker and that this assignment is about English skills. If someone were to edit this to make it sound better, couldn't you get in trouble for it being obviously above your level?

Also, don't you need to give you references and citations?

anonymous · Answer

I re-wrote large swathes of it all the way to the education part. I also inserted some comments.

anonymous · Answer

omg thank you this is helping me alot. i dont think ill get in troble. but yes i do need cites i have them cited on a different paper.

anonymous · Answer

its a research paper so the higher my word skills the better.

anonymous · Answer

message me. what is the paper on?