Question

hey i just made a song please tell me if its good?

Answer 1

I made this song for my gf only she is the best thing that has ever happened to me so if u steal it and use it for any other purposes i will call the cops on u for plagiarism. Thank You :)

Answer 2

please tell when u wana hear it

Answer 3

ok hear it goes

Answer 4

"Once upon a time, I met this baby girl, and i told that baby girl can u be my baby girl"

Answer 5

thats the first one

Answer 6

whats the second one

Answer 7

OMG ur beautiful, OMG ur sexy, Omg ur ////beautiful, sexy, crazy////

Answer 8

is it good or need more work?

Answer 9

I think it needs more work, just to be real, not trying to be rude at all., I can help if you want

Answer 10

lol ok :)

Answer 11

lol , let me think of something

Answer 12

OMG ur so beautiful, OMG ur so sexy, Omg ur so ////beautiful, sexy, crazy////

Answer 13

what about now?

Answer 14

because i play guitar and drums so that will probably sound good

Answer 15

good luck!
writing songs can be pretty hard
maybe change the omg or get rid of it.
Youre so beautiful
Youre so sexy,
Youre so
///beautiful, sexy, crazy////

Y aknow? I can help if you need some. I know im young, but im actually really good at it!

Answer 16

lol how old are u ?

Answer 17

14!
im a published poet here at home and i compete in a bunch of poetry competitions... poetry is a lot like songs.. i write songs too!!

Answer 18

Okay if you want to make a song for your girlfriend why put random stuff like OMG? When it comes to songs OMG should not be included. Saying she's beautiful is fine like "Your so beautiful" or something similar will fit. Also don't include "sexy" because I mean if this is supposed to be some "rap" song than go ahead, but most good songs talking about love or whatever usually don't include "sexy" into it. Also don't say "Baby Girl"? That's implying that she's like small and very very young. So I wouldn't recommend that. However I don't have any ideas for you, but I would recommend to change these lyrics. Just a suggestion.

Answer 19

you could say something like
your my shining star
your my other half
your my everything
you are
your my true love so full of heart
I will always love you
to the bottom of my heart

Answer 20

That's good @allopersonwhat!

Answer 21

thanks haha really anything that rhymes and tells her shes beautiful and that you couldn't live without her is what you want.

Answer 22

True. :)

Answer 23

I agree with what you said about omg.