CAN SOMEONE WORD THIS BETTER, AND MAKE IT LONGER: When you think of the CSI, you usually think investigators handling gory cases. In the show CSI, they make it seem as it’s a glamorous profession, with high-tech labs, and beautiful tech ladies.

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anonymous · Answer

How does this sound?

What comes to mind when thinking of CSI is that the investigators are handling and dealing with gory cases, some even to gross to imagine. In the show CSI Hollywood makes the investigators work seem easy, and a glamourous professions, with high-tech labs, and gorgeous tech ladies.

kittiwitti1 · Answer

I added some visuals, but idk if they fit in.

When people think of CSI the first thing that comes to mind is probably investigators [in sunglasses and long dark trench coats, carrying clipboards and pens] dealing with gory cases, some even too revolting for the common human's imagination. However, in the CSI show, Hollywood glamorizes the profession by adding high-tech labs and beautiful tech ladies, [giving a clean, modern look to the career].

Wth is a tech lady?! o_o;;
I don't know if this is misleading but if it is then you could say at the end that "This is a misleading concept ..." whatever you want to input after that.

anonymous · Answer

i dont know what a tech lady is? do u mean technician?

kittiwitti1 · Answer

You put tech lady @pstrompf .-.
Arguably the asker did put that first.
Technician ladies most likely.

anonymous · Answer

my bad. i tried using most of what the asker put

kittiwitti1 · Answer

Eh, I used tech ladies too lolol xD

kittiwitti1 · Answer

@Harajukulover what are tech ladies?