SHOULD I SPLIT THIS SENTENCE UP OR NOT? When people think of CSI the first thing that comes to mind is probably investigators in sunglasses and long dark trench coats, carrying clipboards and pens dealing with gory cases, some even too revolting for the common human's imagination.

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wolfe8 · Answer

I think the end beginning with "some" should be separated. Or you can use a "-"  
And you can fix other parts too. But honestly English is not my thing :/

anonymous · Answer

Thanks!