Question

CAN SOMEONE EDIT ONE PARAGRAPH FOR ME TO MAKE IT SOUND BETTER, AND LONGER. PUT BETTER VOCAB, AND CORRECT GRAMATICAL ERRORS AND SENETCENCE CORRECTIONS?

Answer 1

Finally, forensic research was a major in college that few students chose to take part in, as for the CSI shows, many students now want to pursue their career in that field. As stated by Willings, many lawyers, judges and legal consultants say they appreciate how CSI-type shows have increased interest in forensic evidence.

Answer 2

At last, forensic research had been a major study course in which only a few students had chosen to take part in. In relation to the CSI show, a major influx of students now want to pursue a career in the field of major forensic sciences. As stated by willings, many lawyers, judges, and other executives who operate in the field of forensic sciences often praise, give and show appreciation to shows that demonstrate the processes that forensic scientist execute daily, with the gain of favor from many interested youth, the field of forensic sciences have indeed become a field that shall be pursued by many of todays youth.

Answer 3

Since CSI appeared on our TV screens, the number of students choosing to study forensic science has increased dramatically. Lawyers, judges and legal consultants, all recognise the impact CSI, and other similar shows, have had on people's interest in forensic evidence, according to Willings.

{That's how I'd do it, shorter, and more to the point. But I have had to guess a little at the exact meaning you wanted to get across. I hope my suggestions help.}