Question

plz look at my story and give your opinion.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

constructive criticisms plz

Answer 3

This story uses great adjectives and compares many things. I belive it's good. Very detailed. I wouln't change anything about it except for the sh*t part. I dont know if you can turn that into school if are (:

Answer 4

cool thanks. this means a lot!

Answer 5

anyone who takes the time out to read i am willling to give a medal... also, i would appreciate honesty. thanks.

Answer 6

I'm being honest. Your story is good you can tell it shows emotion, and no problem (:

Answer 7

aww... thanks

Answer 8

Anytime!