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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Can someone check/fix this sentence without using the word my, he, her, they his, or I and using the word contributed . "contributed several ideas about raising money".

OpenStudy (anonymous):

What do you need fixed

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You could put He or she in the first word

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I would consider saying "Contribution to several ideas about raising money has been made."

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