Question

writing a book what do you think?
chapter 1:
As I approached my home that summer night in Tanzania I was surprised at the strength of the wind. It blew through the trees so gently, making them sway as though they were dancing to an unheard melody. The cold wind sent chills down my spine, causing me to shiver but I found it almost alluring. It would have been if the sky had been the same cherry red it had been that morning, but the darkening sky suggested a storm was coming.

Almost there," I said to myself. I looked to the horizon and saw the rain beginning to fall, lightning cracking through the clouds before a gray shape appeared. The sky went perfectly still, even the clouds refusing to go about their business. I saw IT. White lights almost blinded me, and a strange force pulled me forward, towards the light that came from the Unknown

As I stared at the light I became hypnotize by the fact that it was not transparent. "Come closer" a mysterious voice said , "who said that" I shouted anxiously "Come closer" it had repeated refusing to answer my question. "umm no I don't think I should..." I said as I head the other direction hoping the stranger would go away "we can't let you get away this time" in a more freighting voice.

Immediately I fell on the ground "get up Lynn, get up" I said to myself while I tried to use my arms to support my body but it was futile. I was unable to control my body suddenly I was being dragged closer to the light. "Help help" I screamed hoping someone would come to my aide when no one came I knew I was in danger.

Answer 1

Bookworm scrolled through hundreds of questions posted into the Open Study database. Suddenly, one catches his eye. Curiously he clicks it, and is pleasantly surprised to see a story in the makings! Reading eagerly, he finds that some punctuation is incorrect, and also some small grammar mistakes. Bookworm sighed. Overall he had found it to be most interesting, he was almost sorry that it was over.

Answer 2

@Liindzeyy It looks good so far, keep up the good work. I am also writing a book lol.

Answer 3

The key is to stay motivated, after a while you reach a point that you lose motivation and that is the hardest part in my opinion.

Answer 4

@bookworm00981 the first comment made me laugh , I know it has grammar issue I haven't really "proof" read it yet I just rote what came to me but I'm glad you want to ready more :)

Answer 5

nice...I will buy the book if it works out .

Answer 6

Bookworm waits anxiously as @Liindzeyy types a reply. He wonders what she could possibly be writing that is taking her so long. Suddenly her reply pops up. Bookworm is pleasantly surprised to see that he made @Liindzeyy laugh. "Perhaps I should try to make her laugh again?" He reasoned. "Probably shouldn't" he finally concluded, "I should just thank her for the complement."

Answer 7

Thanks @Liindzeyy !

Answer 8

@bookworm00981 Lol your welcome , @Cakegirls omg you would . you just totally made my day .

Answer 9

I would ..its a lovely book you are making. ^_^

Answer 10

I used to Co-Edit Peoples Books, I still do today.

Answer 11

I edited a book called Journey to Subterra that is published on Kindle.

Answer 12

cool

Answer 13

@bookworm00981 so you think when im done writing the book you could edit it for me?

Answer 14

It is written by one of my friends, we have a lot of friends who write books actually. Sure, I can try.

Answer 15

Whenever your done writing it Inform me and I'll see what I con do to help :D

Answer 16

Can*

Answer 17

Nice Book I am writing a book Also Hope your dreams come true

Answer 18

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm helooooooooooooo

Answer 19

cool I liked how detailed it is.. It was like I was actually there

Answer 20

oh and I NEED to read that book when it's finished because it was AWESOME