I have to write an essay as home work, but I need ideas of how to start my second paragraph ( first reason) using F.I.R.E (fact ,incident ,reason, and example). Here's my introductory paragraph and my first reason is how my grandfather taught me how to swim.

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anonymous · Answer

“Blessed by the ties that bind generations”. In our lifetime we can come across a person who may change our view of life. You may know them closely because they are family or someone who has been there for you through rough patches. They might have taught you how to take your first steps, swim, ride a bike, and maybe taught you educational lessons. Being with you since the day you were born can impact you in a way you can’t understand. My grandfather has been like a second father to me. Teaching me the basics and fun of life that I should always enjoy. No matter who you care about most you will love them no matter what.

anonymous · Answer

And any suggestions you may have please include.

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first question what is the topic?

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The topic is to write about an essay explaining why someone you care about is important to you

anonymous · Answer

Ok thats easy

anonymous · Answer

Ok  well i like to first do a description then follow in to details
sorta like your favorite superhero

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for  example my mom

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so i would begin like this

anonymous · Answer

A caregiver , a lover, a fighter and a best friend all these things and more is why i care about that person who is important to me.
 The person thats important to me is my mom  , like a solidier she fight for all that is worth wild : puting clothes on my back ,craVING MY HUNGER

anonymous · Answer

BUT TELL ME WHAT U HAVE SO FAR IN THE FIRST PART

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At this moment I have nothing I was working on a different essay. I just needed an idea to start off my second paragraph on this topic. I have only done the introduction which is at the top of this post.

anonymous · Answer

well in the second you could put the difficulty you encountered when he had not taught you from there you can show what other similarities or contrast you two have

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age different past time etc

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Okay thank you for the idea's and the help!

anonymous · Answer

no problem