Question

Correct me?

Answer 1

Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley talked to his family for hours about how much he wanted a puppy. It took them forever, but they finally gave in.

Answer 2

Ashley talked to his family for hours about how much he wanted a puppy.

"Ashley, I don't believe that you have time to care for a puppy right now." Said Ashley's mother.
"You'r mother's right Ashley, you have a lot of work to do." Agreed Ashley's dad.
"You're three weeks behind on Science and two weeks behind on Math. The last thing you need is a puppy Ashley!" Ashley's brother shouted!
"I promise to catch up on my work! I'll even do extra chores for a month if I must, I'll come up with a plan!" Exclaimed Ashley!

Ashley's family thought and thought. It took them forever, but they finally gave in!

Answer 3

Ashley is a females name?

Answer 4

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Answer 5

UR THE SECOND PERSON ZALE XD

Answer 6

that's how i normally right dialogues
"Ashley, I don't believe that you have time to care for a puppy right now," said Ashley's mother
*I added a comma between now and the apostrophe and lower cased Said*

Answer 7

@Zale101 thats why I was confused XD THANKS A BUNCH ZALE!

Answer 8

so I just gotta lower case the parts I upper cased right? :P like exclaimed, said, etc?