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Sedaris and Hugh are two ordinary 11 year old boys. But even though they both have childlike characteristics, they live completely different lives. They have different customs in their lifestyle, there is a noticeable difference in their education, and they both experienced different childhoods.

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	Sedaris and Hugh are two ordinary 11 year old boys. But even though they both have childlike characteristics, they live completely different lives. They have different customs in their lifestyle, there is a noticeable difference in their education, and they both experienced different childhoods.

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Two ordinary 11 year old boys, Sedaris and Hugh. However they both have childlike characteristics, their lives are completely different. Their customs in their lifestyle have noticeable differences in which they have experienced different childhoods.

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