Can someone help make this longer and better? It's for a compare and contrast essay.
These two boys lived very different lifestyles. Sedaris family didn’t travel often, he would usually just to school, the store, and back home. While Hugh’s family traveled a lot due to his father being involved in the embassy. Sedaris couldn’t afford to eat fancy foods; a hush puppies from the Fish Market was a first class meal for him. It would be trouble for Sedaris to find a home if was to ever be left on his own, simply because no one could afford to take in a kid if there expenses were too much. On the

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Can someone help make this longer and better? It's for a compare and contrast essay. 
These two boys lived very different lifestyles. Sedaris family didn’t travel often, he would usually just to school, the store, and back home. While Hugh’s family traveled a lot due to his father being involved in the embassy. Sedaris couldn’t afford to eat fancy foods; a hush puppies from the Fish Market was a first class meal for him. It would be trouble for Sedaris to find a home if was to ever be left on his own, simply because no one could afford to take in a kid if there expenses were too much. On the

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other hand, Hugh is able to find a home quickly because his dad is very well connected with many good people.