Question

Which example shows the effects of good editing?
A. The combination of sugar and acid in soft drinks is also bad because it ruins the teeth. It wears the enamel right off.
B. The combination of the sugar and the acid is also bad for the teeth, because it ruins the teeth, it wears the enamel right off.
C. For the teeth, the combination of sugar and acid is also bad. Because it ruins the teeth, it wears the enamel right off.
D. The combination of sugar and acid is also bad, because it ruins the teeth it wears the enamel right off.

Answer 1

@bookworm00981

Answer 2

i think A

Answer 3

editing?

Answer 4

as in which is the correct grammar for which sentence.

Answer 5

probably A then

Answer 6

you understand why Rod right?

Answer 7

YES :) can u guys give medals

Answer 8

B uses 3 commas. When it should be made into two sentences

Answer 9

C has a sentence that starts with "because" which is incorrect. you never should use because to start a sentence

Answer 10

guy to be honest i need to much help right now

Answer 11

D is just improper.. there should be a comma in the sentence

Answer 12

:P