I have a part in my essay where I have thoughts of my own to stuff my mother says to me.
My question is do I have to indent every time I have a thought and she says something like you do with dialect?

For example it's like this: As I watched trees swiftly pass by, my other interjected "We're going to have to move again?" Like I care anymore. "I know you hate moving but it's just something we have to do." Sure you have to do it. "Sorry sweetie."

Would I change it like this:
As I watched trees swiftly pass by, my other interjected "We're going to have to move again?"
Like I care anymore.
"I know you hate moving but it's just something we have to do."
Sure you have to do it.
"Sorry sweetie."

Question

I have a part in my essay where I have thoughts of my own to stuff my mother says to me.
My question is do I have to indent every time I have a thought and she says something like you do with dialect?

For example it's like this: As I watched trees swiftly pass by, my other interjected "We're going to have to move again?" Like I care anymore. "I know you hate moving but it's just something we have to do." Sure you have to do it. "Sorry sweetie."

Would I change it like this:    
       As I watched trees swiftly pass by, my other interjected "We're going to have to move again?" 
       Like I care anymore.
      "I know you hate moving but it's just something we have to do." 
      Sure you have to do it.
      "Sorry sweetie."

anonymous · Answer

Sure, I can help you. Send it to me, and I will review it, and edit it.

math2400 · Answer

thank you! sending it now

math2400 · Answer

i'd appreciate it if you could make ur suggestions on the message and not post here. Just don't want the essay to be public lol

anonymous · Answer

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