can someone help me edit my essay when i'm finished? Put better vocabulary words, and correct the sentence structure.

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pixiedust1 · Answer

Sure!! :D

anonymous · Answer

can you help me edit this to make it sound better. 
Kids 10 years ago played ping pong, Ataris, and dolls. The children of today play with nerfs guns, toy guns that actually look like real guns.  Violent video games, television shows, and movies ar the reason kid aspire to use guns and be criminals. They see a bad guy with a gun and automatically want to be just like them. Children should remain ignorant about guns. Guns are something that children should not be brought up on.