CAN SOMEONE EDIT TO MAKE IT LONGER AND SOUND BETTER. WITH BETTER VOCAB.
All across America, there are people who have guns illegally, and there are some who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for good reasons, bad reasons, or both. Guns should be banned, because it's polluting the minds of young children, gun owners do not respect the rules, and law abiding citizen should not be able to get access to guns.

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CAN SOMEONE EDIT TO MAKE IT LONGER AND SOUND BETTER. WITH BETTER VOCAB. 
All across America, there are people who have guns illegally, and there are some who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for good reasons, bad reasons, or both. Guns should be banned, because it's polluting the minds of young children, gun owners do not respect the rules, and law abiding citizen should not be able to get access to guns.