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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Which one makes sense? The cabin hung damp, with an earthy vapor. An earthy vapor hung damp around the cabin.

OpenStudy (pixiedust1):

The first one is improper use of a comma, so it would have to be the second one

OpenStudy (pixiedust1):

The second one sounds terrific btw! (The first one has a few grammatical errors, so don't use it)

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