Question

CAN SOMEONE HELP WITH THIS INTRODUCTORY PARAGHRAPHG MAKE IT LONGER, AND PUT BETTER VOCAB IN IT
All across America, there are people who have guns illegally, and there are some who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for good reasons, bad reasons, or both. Guns should be banned, because it's polluting the minds of young children, gun owners do not respect the rules, and law abiding citizen should not be able to get access to guns

Answer 1

CAN SOMEONE HELP WITH THIS INTRODUCTORY PARAGHRAPHG MAKE IT LONGER, AND PUT BETTER VOCAB IN IT
All across the nation, there are many people who have guns illegally, and there are as well many people who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for acceptable reasons like to give them piece of mind, but there are others that have them for the intention of hurting or killing someone, some people may even have them for both. Guns should be banned, it's polluting the minds of young children with the ideas of violence. Maybe that's why today's society is having a growing violence rate. We are showing today adolescence that guns and violence are okay by giving them video games and TV shows that are promoting it. Today's gun owners do not respect the all rules and laws that come with owning a gun. If you are truly a law abiding citizen, what should you need access to a gun for?

Answer 2

how's that?