Question

CAN SOMEONE HELP ME WITH THIS PARAGRAPH??

Answer 1

Sedaris and Hugh are two ordinary 11 year old boys. Although they both have childlike characteristics, both live completely different lives. They have different customs in their lifestyle; there is a noticeable difference in their education, and they both experienced different childhoods.

Answer 2

my teacher said this about the paragraph: This paragraph lacks the required opening sentence. It does not have a summary and the thesis is incomplete, yet wordy.

Answer 3

what is the required opening sentence?

Answer 4

she gave us examples like these
Sample thesis statement for contrast paper: In terms of social networking sites, Facebook focuses on presenting your daily life to others, whereas MySpace allows you to focus more on demonstrating your personal style.

Sample thesis statement for compare/contrast paper: While both Facebook and MySpace allow you to meet other users who have similar interests, only MySpace allows you to demonstrate your personal style.

Answer 5

and you are comparing Sedaris and Hugh... so find the biggest difference

Answer 6

well they have different lifestyles! that's their biggest difference