Question

CAN SOMEONE HELP EDIT THIS PARAGRAPGH?

Answer 1

Sedaris and Hugh are two boys who lived completely different lives. In the story, “My African Childhood,” the author presents a good picture on each of their lifestyles. Sedaris was a kid who had a lot to give, but Hugh was the opposite. They both have different educational values. Every kid childhood is different. Sedaris and Hugh are friends now, but they both came from different backgrounds.

Answer 2

MY TEACHER SAID THIS ABOUT THE PARAGRAPH: Try giving information that has a little more depth.

Answer 3

@Harajukulover you could try something like this:

Sedaris and Hugh are two African boys who lived completely different lives. In the story "My African Childhood" the author presents an amazing picture on each of their lifestyles. Sedaris was a kid who had a lot to give, while Hugh on the other hand, did not have as much to give. They both had different values for education. Every childhood is different, because no two things can be exactly the same. Sedaris and Hugh came from different backgrounds but have now become friends.

Answer 4

Sedaris and Hugh are two African boys who lived completely different lives from one another. In the story, “My African Childhood,” the author presents a very detailed demonstration on each of their lifestyles. Sedaris was a boy who had a lot to offer, but Hugh was the exact opposite. They both have different educational values as well. Every kid's childhood is different, and because of their differences, Sedaris and Hugh have become friends.

Answer 5

So she just wanted you to use better vocabulary?