CAN SOMEON HELP ME EDIT THIS:
According to Richard Willings, who is the author of “The CSI Effect”, many crime shows such as CSI, have had a profound influence on the way the court system handles cases. Scientific evidence is not only well respected throughout court cases, but has become a customary form of evidentiary support compared to previous forms of evidence. CSI shows made high-tech data something that should be expected in a court case. Through their popularity, CSI shows have made forensic studies popular throughout colleges across the world.
you said csi to many times
Is that it?
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erm idk i would suggest just saying shows instead of the last 2 csi's
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According to Richard Willings, the author of “The CSI Effect”, many crime shows, such as CSI, have had a profound influence on the way the court system handles cases. Compared to previous forms of evidence, scientific evidence is not only well respected in courts, but has also become a customary form of evidentiary support. Shows like CSI make high-tech data expected in a court case. Due to their popularity, crime scene investigation shows have made forensic studies popular in colleges throughout the world.
That's what my edit would be. You don't have to use all of it (or any of it for that matter) if you don't like it.
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