Question

can someone help me edit my essay? im in high school and its for my AP english class. And Im writing a college admission essay. PLEASE HELP! mabye if you are a senior or in college, pls help

Answer 1

its only a page and a half, ill attach it here, anyone wanting to help me?

Answer 2

ill help you

Answer 3

okay ill attach it

Answer 4

the third page doesnt count

Answer 5

any advice?

Answer 6

ok so what do you need help with?

Answer 7

I need help with making it more stronger

Answer 8

adding more details, grammatical errors or even how to structure it, any help would be fine.

Answer 9

do you have to answer that Q:?

Answer 10

Yeah. I have to follow that prompt.