Question

Very easy for native Spanish speakers.
Just confirm or correct my work. Thank you
Assignment:

"C. Write five sentences, using the “hace + time + que” construction. Use both the past and present tense of the verb to tell your teacher something about yourself. When you are satisfied with your answers, attach them to Asignación 9.06."

My answers:

"Hace once años que yo vivia en Denmark.

Hace dos años que yo vivia en Edina, Minnesota

Hace tres años que yo vivia en Ashland, Oregon.

Hace once anos que vivi' en Florida.

Hace catorce años que yo vivia en New Jersey."

Answer 1

Hace once años yo vivia en Denmark.
11 years ago i lived in Denmark.

before Hace dos años que yo vivia en Edina, Minnesota
After Han pasado dos anos desde que yo vivian en Edina, Minnesota
It's been two years since i lived in Edina, Minnesota

Hace tres años que yo vivia en Ashland, Oregon.
"Han" sido 3 anos "desde que" yo vivia en Shland, Oregon
It's been 3 years "since" i lived in Shland, Oregon

Hace once anos que vivi' en Florida. you forgot the pronoun
Han sido once anos desde que "Yo" vivia en Florida
Hace catorce años que yo vivia en New Jersey.
"Han" pasado catorce anos "desde que" yo vivia en New Jersey
I know the assignment must include "que" but using it frequently doesnt work dependign if you could something else lke "desde" meaning since or "han" that works as "been"

Most of your sentences can be fixed by using "Han pasado .... anos" meaning it's been ... years" and "desde que" since that..."

Answer 2

The present alternative is:
Hace [time] que vivo en ...