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OpenStudy (anonymous):

I know that my question doesn't belong here but can you just help me. Is my transition good ? Besides he never thought that his name is awful until Barry comments on it. Moreover Barry never stops picking on Ishmael from then.

OpenStudy (unklerhaukus):

translation?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

yep, Beside and Moreover is my transition

OpenStudy (unklerhaukus):

the tense is odd

OpenStudy (anonymous):

There are significant grammatical errors.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

So any ideas ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

my essay is due tomorrow so I'm a bit nervous

OpenStudy (unklerhaukus):

its weird to start with the word `Besides` , what is the context ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

How does this sound to you? : "Besides, he never thinks his name is awful until Barry comments on it." Hmm. Context would be nice. I'm not sure from what point of view you're trying to write this.

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