Question

Can someone help me turn this into 3rd person. I am writing an About me section for my blog and I can't seem to make it sound good. Thank You

"My name is Alison Ori was born in march 21 1986 in Athens, Greece Started playing piano since i was 7 and when i was 11 I got interested in writing melodies. i taught myself music but i worked with many professionalls and that helped me to think professionally. i play piano as my main instrument and guitar bass ,Tar on the side. I composed over 30 songs in my 20 musical years. i moved to the US november 2009 with my family.

Answer 1

I love calm places for composing and that's why i chose Columbus, Ohio and its environment for my videos. currently i'm working on different singles for myself and some other singers in France and outside France.

Answer 2

To make this third person you would say something like " Alison Ori was born on March 21, 1986 in Athens, Greece. She started playing piano at the age of 7, and when she was 11 Alison got interested in writing melodies. Alison taught herself music but worked with many professionals that helped her to think professionally. She plays piano as her main instrument and guitar bass ,Tar on the side. She has composed over 30 songs in her 20 musical years. She moved to the United States in November 2009 with her family. She loves calm places for composing and that inspired her to choose Columbus, Ohio and that environment for her videos. She is currently working on a vast variety of different singles for herself and some other singers in and outside France." I changed some words, phrases, etc. to make this more grammatically correct and third person. Enjoy!

P.s. I love music too!