Question

what will be a good thing to change in your community? need to write an essay with 1000words for this one. Any suggestions? must be supported with research

Answer 1

It depends on where you live. You could write about things like trash needing to be picked up from the streets, better roads, better schools and parks. If there is a lot of teen problems then write about maybe creating teen hangouts. That's just a few examples. Hope it helps!

Answer 2

I live in harrisonburg, va. the things that u mentioned are not quite problem here. Im thinking about opening a big malls here. but i cant find anything to support it. any ideas?

Answer 3

Hm. You could use prices of stores that are already there or you could say that there is a lack of stores. I.E. If you don't have a Victoria's Secret in your town say that by opening a mall you would be able to get that store plus other ones and a mall would be a good hangout plus it would eliminate the cost of driving to other places, and etc. Does that help?

Answer 4

definitely! just need to find a research to support it

Answer 5

do u have any idea to start? like for the introduction? should i talk about my town a bit?

Answer 6

Is your town big or small?
If it's small you could definitely open up with an introductions stating that and then make it flow into the statement of the lack of stores.
If it's big try saying something like "Despite living in a big town, many stores have yet to come here which is why a mall would be perfect" or something like that

Answer 7

its a small one. appreciate your help!

Answer 8

Not a problem, glad I was able to! :)