Question

DOES THE LAST SENTENCE OF THIS PARAGRAPH MAKE SENSE? IF NOT HOW CAN I CHANGE IT TO MAKE IT BETTER?

Answer 1

Education is something that has been a very positive aspect in the world since the world was created. Not only is education important for everyone to achieve, those who could not afford it before, now can get it for free. College is very expensive, and not many could afford it before, so either they don’t go, or they stick with their minimum waged job. Now the government will pay for a kids college funds, and will allow them to get the proper education they deserve. Since education has become free throughout the world, low income families will not be left out, since they will be covered by the government. Low income families or otherwise will not feel burdened by the high cost of education for their children. Also people with higher education generally lead to higher paying, and better jobs. There is also a self-confidence factor that can come from having a higher education than others. On the contrary, free education can lead to substandard education or educational goals if there is not enough money to the educator.

Answer 2

it, in a way, could make sense in SOME cases. some teachers will grow frustrated and slack on the job. and not leave that job because they have been fully invested for a while or there is no more jobs available. however, there are some teachers who actually enjoy teaching without a second thought of money. they do worry about money but focus on their students first. prime example is the freedom writers teacher. she took on three jobs to change their future.