DOES THIS PARAGRAPH MAKE SENSE? MY ESSAY IS ABOUT THE POSITIVE APSECTS OF THE WORLD, AND THE PARAGRAPH IS ABOUT GLOBAL WARMING. I JUST WANT THE POSITIVE AFFECTS OF IT. NOT THE NEGATIVE.

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anonymous · Answer

Global warming is something happening on its own, whether it’s good or bad. As too many bad effects, there are also good ones. Global warming has its advantages, the icing of the earth, caused many plant life to die. Now that the earth is temperature is decreasing, it will cause many new plant lives to grow. Iceland could become a new economic superpower, if the cold temperature will warm down, it will be the only country to have cold temperature, so it would be a target to many people in the world. Expansion of temperate zones is what I would consider the best aspect. From a human standpoint, this translates into longer growing seasons and less severe winters. From an animal standpoint, this will in some cases result in a great expansion of range, zone of livability. Think of deer, coyote, wolf, etc.

anonymous · Answer

in stead of As to many bad effects... try although it has to many bad effects.

anonymous · Answer

4th sentence it is increasing not decreasing.