Question

CAN SOMEONE HELP ME WITH THIS ESSAY? MY PROFESSOR SAID THE THESIS IS UNCLEAR.

Answer 1

The Positive Aspects of the Earth
Even though the world has its fair share of cruel and vile behavior, there are also many positive things that exist in it. The advances such as technology, medicine, and science are bringing new light to the world. Free education has opened many doors and opportunities to the youth and is also making a huge positive impact on every generation since. Everything from Global warming and new technology is changing the world in a positive way. I’m going to tell you the many positive inventions, people, technologies, items and more that make this world such a great place to live.
In regards to advancements, the world has come a long way. From the telephone to a solar powered car, or even the flying car. Advancements such as technology, medicine, and science have improved over the past 100 years as we continue to develop new improved technologies and strategies. Still, advancements to this day are improving more and more. Medicine has also improved over the last 100 years. Cures to cancer, HIV, and many other diseases have been discovered, and even treated. Medicine is improving, which is making huge problems such as sickness from hunger and malnutrition, viruses, and more to be treatable. Science has increased in discoveries since the BC era. Not only new tools, weapons, transportation and more have been discovered, but also new species, life forms, and remote places around the world have been over the past million years. And we continue to discover more and more each and every day.

Although the advancements in today’s world are positive, education is something that has been a very positive aspect in the world ever since it was created. Not only is education important for everyone to achieve, but those who could not afford it before, now can get it for free. College is very expensive, and not many could afford it before, so either they don’t go, or they stick with their minimum waged job. Now the government will pay for a kids college funds, and will allow them to get the proper education they deserve. Since education has become something easily obtainable throughout the world, low income families will not be left out, since they will be covered by the government. Low income families or otherwise will not feel burdened by the high cost of education for their children. Also people with higher education generally have higher paying, and better jobs. There is also a self-confidence factor that can come from having a higher education than others. On the contrary, free education can lead to substandard education or educational goals. That is if there is not enough money to the educator.
Global warming is something happening on its own, whether it’s good or bad. Although it has many bad effects, there are also good ones. Global warming has its advantages, the icing of the earth, caused many plant life to die. Now that the earth is temperature is increasing, it will cause many new plant lives to grow. Iceland could become a new economic superpower, if the cold temperature will warm down, it will be the only country to have cold temperature, so it would be a target to many people in the world. Expansion of temperate zones is what I would consider the best aspect. From a human standpoint, this translates into longer growing seasons and less severe winters. From an animal standpoint, this will in some cases result in a great expansion of range, zone of livability. Think of deer, coyote, wolf, etc.
The world is a beautiful place filled with wonders and unknown mysteries. Due to advancements in technology, medicine, science, art and many other fields, life has been made easier and filled with entertainment. People are able to live in better conditions, cure many diseases, and stay healthy due to these advancements. These aspects make this world a positive place and filled with hope.

Answer 2

You are still working on this paper? I recall helping you with your thesis statement some 2 months ago. I believe I told you at the time that your thesis statement was way to broad and that you needed to revise it and narrow its focus. I see that you didn't, which is why your thesis is unclear.