Question

Raps 4 and Songs 4

Answer 1

The last straw (rap): You’re all about to get shot whether it’s your fault or not shut your mouths im not going to take much more of this im not a faker your messing with a shark before you start barking off BS lets see how large your balls are when we meet face to face ill take my shoe lace out to strangle you the only thing you will have when im done with you is the gin you drink.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

This part ---> im not a faker your messing with a shark.
Replace the

Answer 4

it's sounds bnetter because then both lines are referring too you. instead of the top one just refferring too you then the bottom one refferring to somthing else.

Answer 5

I won't stop: I heard em say I was a pervert and a jerk so keep on squawking trash. That’s not true God bless you all because you probably are hurting, what you guys said never shook me because I won’t ever quit or drop. Till he says im finished iv been lied about and booed off the stage, but to everyone who said I who wanted me to die have a good day and god bless you cuz. I won’t stop im setting my pride aside, and speak truth now praise God and not me because hes the one who gives me strength to continue doing this.

Answer 6

God bless you too!

Answer 7

The last straw:
and maybe here instead of this.....when we meet face to face ill take my shoe lace out to strangle you the only thing you will have when im done with you is the gin you drink.

maybe this.....When we meet face to face I'll take my shoe lace to strangle you with, the only thing you'll have when I'm done is the gin that you drink. Idk, up too you though

I won't stop:
and with this line take out the because; what you guys said never shook me because I won’t ever quit or drop.

then this line; I won’t stop im setting my pride aside, and speak truth now praise God and not me because hes the one who gives me strength to continue doing this.
- I won’t stop im setting my pride aside, speakin truth now praise God and not me because hes the one who gives me strength to continue.

Well thats all I see from here.

Answer 8

Stay strong: Stay strong Your bones can be broken, but your sprit can never be broken. You will get back up on your feet, because written in your heart is the keys too unlocking the secrets of life. So when you feel the blues and have no clue on what you are supposed to do he has a plan for you. Never let your dreams die because he has the power to make them a reality, when you feel like a loser and your situation failing, don’t be discouraged because he’s right by your side so stay strong.

Answer 9

I like that one actually. NO fixing ^-^

Answer 10

:)

Answer 11

Like ring around the rosy : Like ring around the rosy we all fall down, im supposed to be the leader that never shows fear when I come near death. And im caught up in deceit because I bought what she was selling, she was not telling me the whole story. It tore my heart in pieces when I found out the truth at the very core of my heart, I held hate because like ring around the rosy we all fall down. I forgave them but little did I know it was too late to save em I couldn’t make the slate clean, she never wanted to speak to me again ring around the rosy we all fall down.

Answer 12

<3 it

Answer 13

O.M.G. i really like these xD

Answer 14

i remember it all :'(

Answer 15

i no who shot me .....jack

Answer 16

Straws - Sharks - Shoe Laces O_o

Answer 17

o.O

Answer 18

Raps 5 will be out soon