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OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

Poem

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

this was the first poem i ever wrote and sorry because when i wrote it i was stressed and angry

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

bad poem

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That was amazing...It made me cry......

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

it was mean

OpenStudy (anonymous):

It was honest...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

and that is why I like you, you stick to the truth, no matter how hard it is

OpenStudy (anonymous):

that was so sweet I liked it a lot. But I hope some of what you said you didn't mean.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

this poem was really sweet and you told her how you felt

OpenStudy (gatorgirl):

I loved it, that is now my all time fave poem. It made me cry. It was honestly very beautiful.

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

thx

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This poem was very sentimental I can tell you really liked this girl and wanted to give her the world. Keep trying I'm almost positive she will give you another chances. That's how girls are we can give chances but after a while we can't for give. So if she gives you another chance, don't mess it up okay? You seem like a nice guy try not to blow it okay?

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

i was just honest and from now on i will always be honest

OpenStudy (anonymous):

That Was So Sweet !

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Good. Good Luck.

OpenStudy (seaturtle113):

Good job, Travis.... I really wish you didn't feel like that, though

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

yeah

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

i thought u guys would nvr be me friends after u read this wow

OpenStudy (anonymous):

why wouldn't they?

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

the poem was mean thats y

OpenStudy (anonymous):

no it wasn't it was sweet and kind. Nothing mean inside.

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

i was mean to caleb

OpenStudy (anonymous):

it wasn't mean you were just being honest and saying how you felt toward her. it was a really good poem

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

wow

OpenStudy (dylangr1997):

I really liked the poem. It was very honest and deep

OpenStudy (anonymous):

You weren't being mean to Caleb you were telling him how u felt Traivs. There was nothing mean trust us. 'kay? :D

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

kk :I i still feel guilty

OpenStudy (anonymous):

see what ^ loveless is saying is true and you feel guilty because you told him the truth

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

gatorgirl is hannah and whiteboy is caleb and caleb my friend thats y i feel guilty

OpenStudy (anonymous):

ohh. was in that same position too. just talk to him and try to work it out

OpenStudy (anonymous):

*I

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Look you said nothing wrong. It was a poem it doesn't have to mean that everything you said in there was true. Try giving this to Hannah see what she saids okay? It was really sweet.

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

kk

OpenStudy (anonymous):

~hugs @travisbrown372 ~ Good luck

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

~hugs~ and hannah doesnt like me she likes caleb

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nX1VeFBo9AQ

OpenStudy (anonymous):

http://tinychat.com/et2r0o

OpenStudy (seaturtle113):

Sure.

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

i got to go in 15min its time for me to go tell the police bout my cuz :'''''''''''''''"(

OpenStudy (anonymous):

bye

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

bye

OpenStudy (anonymous):

@thadyoung read this, I cried

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

thad respond for youre gf

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

lol

OpenStudy (anonymous):

13 days @thadyoung

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

wat

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

thx @DullJackel09

OpenStudy (forevershorty):

thats really good for a first poem. :o my first poem sucked

OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

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OpenStudy (travisbrown372):

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OpenStudy (anonymous):

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