Can some one revise this please?

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anonymous · Answer

Love can be dangerous
and it can also be hurtful. 
but always be courageous
because it can be helpful

Love can be a blessing
from the almighty lord; 
sometimes it might go missing
but you need to find it with your sword

Your sword can be your mind
and it can also be your heart, 
but you need to bind
with your love before it gets cut by someone’s dart

anonymous · Answer

Love can be dangerous
Love can be hurtful
Always be courageous
It can be helpful

Love can be a blessing 
by the almighty Lord
It might go missing
So find it with you sword

You sword is your mind
It is also your heart
but you need to be blind
your love might be cut by someone's dart

??? idk sounds a little better to me, but if you dont want to change it just remember to capitalize Lord

anonymous · Answer

Love can be dangerous
Love can truly sting
Always be courageous
It can make your soul sing

Love can be a blessing 
by the almighty Lord
It might leave you guessing
and it might leave you floored

Love is gentel and kind
though it is never smart
so you need to be blind
and see love through your heart

:) hope i helped

charlotte123 · Answer

^ Beautiful <3

anonymous · Answer

Man you guys made my poem into beauty! Thank you so much!!!

anonymous · Answer

It's what we're here for! :)