Question

Need help with essay!
I am starting this new school and they want me to write an essay on why I want to join it. I need ideas on how to begin the essay. I know that I feel "honored" to go to the school and all that but I don't know how to begin the essay...

Answer 1

Hmmm something that might help with this is ....how well isthe school known....maybe what opportunities will this new school give you ....or how will this help you further your career and learning?

Answer 2

Well do you know how I can write that in paragraph form? I know that the school has a really good reputation...

Answer 3

Pick one of those and write a few sentences on each reason...say you picked the new opportunities....maybe say a few sentences on the academic portion of the school....and maybe a few on the presitige and maybe a few on what this will do for your career

Answer 4

- You feel honored to go to the School.
- It would change your future.
And last but not least - What @Spectrum said.

Answer 5

Ya that really helps but what should be my first sentence? I can't just jump in and say how this will help my career...

Answer 6

It should be a hook - A sentence that would grab the readers attention!

Answer 7

What makes me want to join - Insert school name here - ?

Answer 8

Ya something catchy

Answer 9

Then you can start with your Introduction and continue off with your body and conclusion :)

Answer 10

Hmmm you need a clicnher..something to drag them in ...maybe "Across the nation you find many schools of prestige but when I think of where I want to go only this school comes to mind , and this is why. .." or something

Answer 11

^ Or that

Answer 12

I can say that I cannot believe that I have finally been chosen for this school , ( I have waited for about 4 months to get accepted accepted

Answer 13

Ya Spectrum, that's good too

Answer 14

@pzahid17 But It wouldn't focus on the topic on why I want to join it >.>

Answer 15

Remember to stay on the topic! It's very important when you're writing an essay :)

Answer 16

Well. I can continue on and say that the wait was worthwhile because of how this school is good for my future and so on..

Answer 17

Anyway thanks for all the help guys! I really appreciate it!

Answer 18

No problem! Glad that we could help!

Answer 19

It's 11:30 here and need to catch some Z's ;)

Answer 20

Same here LOL
12:34 >.>
Goodnight!

Answer 21

U 2!