Question

Wrote this poem about him a week ago...
Losing You
I feel like I'm losing you, never gonna get you back. I watched you leave, wish I coulda played it back; like a movie woulda pressed rewind, and then I woulda thought about everything I'm losing. Now I gotta wish, wish on a star, a dream thats never gonna come true, cus you said if you left this be the last time for sure. Now I see you around, with my best friend. I feel the pain deep within, wish it go away, hide in a dark place. You’re in my heart baby, but I wish you were in my arms, but you’ll always be in my thoughts baby.

Answer 1

Just stay strong, hon</3

Answer 2

Same too you </3

Answer 3

touche.

Answer 4

Thank you, Stay strong you guys. It'll get better, thats all we can hope for.

Answer 5

Keep your head up high. It won't be bad forever, I promise. c:

Answer 6

it beautiful <3

Answer 7

i wrote a song today as well
Even though everyday is a struggle
And we dont know what to do
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday we argue
about the dumbest pellett
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everynight I cry
worried about losing you
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday is a constant war
Im not afraid to walk the walk
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday you question me
I dont give a damm
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for
.....
And ill keep fighting this war
Because even though you may not know it
Your worth fighting for

I fight because I love you
and I fight because I care

Even though we may not talk everyday
You're constantly on my mind
I cant stop thinking bout you
I cant stop dreaming bout you

I feel as if im going insane
but your all worth it because I love you So
And i will always fight and fight
our daily wars.

Answer 8

your poem is really good i wish i could right like that

Answer 9

nice poems...very sad though...

Answer 10

hey

Answer 11

You guys are good with this, you should also post it in the writing section on here to get more feedback.

Answer 12

oh okay thanks havent thought about that

Answer 13

@summerforever21 AHHHmazing poem pretty girl^-^
@dinmosiaren You never cease2 amaze me:j
Stay strong&chin up you guys. I WUV u both soooo very much!!! <3

Answer 14

haha lol thanks michelle

Answer 15

Summers's poem is amazing, tragic though :(