Question

Wrote a song let me know what you think

Answer 1

"Worth Fighting For"

Even though everyday is a struggle
And we dont know what to do
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday we argue
about the dumbest pellett
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everynight I cry
worried about losing you
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday is a constant war
Im not afraid to walk the walk
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for

Even though everyday you question me
I dont give a damm
Ill work it out with you
You're worth fighting for
.....
And ill keep fighting this war
Because even though you may not know it
Your worth fighting for

I fight because I love you
and I fight because I care

Even though we may not talk everyday
You're constantly on my mind
I cant stop thinking bout you
I cant stop dreaming bout you

I feel as if im going insane
but your all worth it because I love you So
And i will always fight and fight
our daily wars.

Answer 2

Did you post this in the writing section?

Answer 3

Or OpenStudy Feedback

Answer 4

what do you mean?

Answer 5

It's really good. I really like it. Also, is this rap?

Answer 6

http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/OpenStudy%20Feedback

Answer 7

Some of these lyrics sound like hopsins.

Answer 8

http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Writing

Answer 9

Try posting in those two sections too to get feedback

Answer 10

ive heard of hopsins. never actually heard any music though.

Answer 11

He's dope asf' . He's kinda like underground.

Answer 12

oh aiight cool cool i know of him just never heard any of his stuff

Answer 13

Really liked it ;) , what r u planning to make of this or was it for a personal reason??

Answer 14

it was for a personal reason.. i mean i might compose some piano and add it too it. I play piano guitar and drums.

Answer 15

I like it :)

Answer 16

thanks floridaa

Answer 17

this is some of my piano on youtube... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G4UltfQmUXM

Answer 18

im currently still writing this song.

Answer 19

It sounds nice so far... I'm just now learning how to play the piano.

Answer 20

oh cool cool thanks. i have some more stuff

Answer 21

I like It - But It looks like the Filter disagrees LOLLLLLLLLLLL

Answer 22

what?

Answer 23

I was talking about the second stanza - On the second line LOL

Answer 24

yeah they trippin

Answer 25

I like it :)

Answer 26

XD NICE

Answer 27

thanks both of you

Answer 28

thanks clara.university

Answer 29

hey both of yall

Answer 30

hey :D

Answer 31

how are you ?

Answer 32

Hello :)

Answer 33

hey victoria

Answer 34

I think this belongs in the Music section, instead of the English section. But, I love the song! :-)

Answer 35

I like the song,but I think you should kinda revise the way you say things....like instead of putting "even though" at the beginning of every "verse"...you know change it up a bit same as with the "your worth fighting for". Even though that's the name of the song,...you don't want to repeat yourself too much. Its really sweet tho...he/she would love it I think ^_^

Answer 36

You may try putting it in the music section also.

Answer 37

Good idea ^

Answer 38

Thank you! :)

Answer 39

No problem :D

Answer 40

rly nice I like it !

Answer 41

@GracieMarieSmiles. ive heard hopsin. all he does is freestyle. i love his white contacts. and the ill mind of hopsin~

Answer 42

@graysondeblock I like Sag my pants. Lmfao ! When I do listen to rap I listen to him.