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I will give medals ; I need to revise & add 2 syntax to this paragraph ! -The telephone has improved into the cellular phone, which lets us communicate instantly without having to talk, but by texting. Texting has helped many people, you can keep in touch with your parents if you go to the movies to let them know it’s time to be picked up. As well as in cases of emergency’s when talking can injure you. Via text you can also know what bills you have to pay on what dates. The cellular phone is more than just a phone for some, but work!